The world is a hard cruel place Ch. One

The world is a hard cruel place

Ch. One
The world is a hard cruel place, but it can be a nice pleasant place if we all fallow some rules.
The 1st thing we all need to do is stop being so self centered, try to be more understanding of others and don’t judge those who may be different than what you may think is “NORMAL.”
This story is to show a way we can all live in with no animosity or judgment among one another

Mom I don’t want to go to school today! All the kids hate me!!!
No they don’t you just need to give them a chance to get to know you… Now get your butt up and get ready for school.

Matt lays in bed dreading going to his 4th grade class at his new school, you see there is one thing about him that not a lot of 4th graders have to deal with. In fact there “Was” only one person who knew of his secret then last Friday during a sleepover he had to celebrate his 6th birthday one of the boys there saw him getting ready for bed after his mom called him up to get his pj’s on.
You see him unlike most kids his age he wets the bed and 3 years ago when he was at his old town where he had more friends and family he had 4 friends there that he knew and they even had the same problems in common, the 5 of them would have sleepovers and the only rule was that once it was time to come in to the house for the night the bathroom was off limits. They talked and agreed that if they had to wear diapers to bed they would have as much fun with them.
That resulted in all of them all to become dependent on diapers at night and that is where last weekend comes into play.
He had this sleepover to hopefully find a trusted group of friends but all he got was a room full of bully’s and getting teased and laughed at when he walked down in his pj’s with a slightly bigger butt than the rest of the boys.
There was only one person who did not laugh at him and he had good reason not to…
This boy John Olson was 7 and has always had a really weird fascination with diapers, he would steal diapers from his sister who is going though potty training at the ripe old age of 5, see his mom does not believe in pushing potty training. So any how John was at this sleepover and feeling a bit confused as to what he should do…
If he went along with the other kids he would be fitting in with everyone but if he stuck up for Matt he would be an outcast and happy…
John thinks to himself trying to decide what to do?? Then it hits him!
He had to use the bathroom and he was going to wet his pj’s if he did not get up now. So what does he do but the only thing he thought would fix his dilemma and possibly even get into a diaper.

So as he stands in Matt’s basement John stands right where he is in full view of every one at the party and proceeds to let go of his 7 year old bladder. As a wet spot slowly at first then gradually starts to form around his crotch Matt wile sad from the teasing from the other kids see’s John and what he seems to be doing right there in his basement.
He walks over to John and quietly asked him “Hey did you know you had to go potty?”
John replies: Nope, I am so sorry…

Matt said: oh not a problem don’t worry about it my mom is use to it I have made the same kind messes and sometimes worse a week ago I was down here playing PS3 and did not want to get up to go pooped forgot I had already taken my night time diaper off already, and I just filled my underwear to capacity.
Mom came down and smelled me while she walked by and asked me if I messed myself… absent minded I replied “Yes I did” still playing my game…
She grabbed me and showed me the leaking mess on the floor In shock I go and run up to the bathroom and strip and hop in the shower.

John: wow that’s pretty crazy… what happened next??

Matt: I will tell you when we go up and get you cleaned up… so they walked up to get his mom and get John all fixed up and cleaned up.

Matt: so this is what happened she fallowed me up to the bathroom and we talked and agreed that it would be best that I Ware diapers about 60min’s before I go to bed and on sleepover’s I ware them all through the time everyone is here.

Re: The world is a hard cruel place Ch. One

Thanks I will think about this story a bit longer.
and No the only 2 in diapers so far is John and Matt…

and i am a 1st time writer so i am sorry i am not that good but i would like to get better so yeah

also i think my ADD is making me not be vary focused and my spelling even with spell checker has always been bad… i will try to be better at it
maybe some one here can help like proof reed my story before i post it…

Re: The world is a hard cruel place Ch. One

My rules for critiquing.

1.) Spelling and grammar have to be mostly correct.
2.) Length has to be at least 2000 words unless it is a complete story.

If you follow those rules, I will critique your story before you post it.

Oh and “follow” means to go or come after such as, “He keeps following me because he likes me.” “Fallow” is how this story should be left.

The spell checker will not tell you if you used the correct words or not, such as in this poem:

I halve a spelling chequer
It came with my pea sea
It plane lee marques four my revue
Miss steaks aye ken knot sea

Eye ran this poem threw it
Your sure reel glad two no
It’s vary polished in it’s weigh
My chequer tolled me sew

A chequer is a bless sing
It freeze yew lodes of thyme
It helps me awl stiles two reed
And aides mi when aye rime

To rite with care is quite a feet
Of witch won should be proud
And wee mussed dew the best wee can
Sew flaws are knot aloud

And now bee cause my spelling
is checked with such grate flare
Their are know faults with in my cite
Of nun eye am a wear

Each frays come posed up on my screen
Eye trussed to be a joule
The chequer poured o’er every word
To cheque sum spelling rule

That’s why aye brake in two averse
My righting wants too pleas
Sow now ewe sea wye aye dew prays
Such soft wear for pea seas