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The Leafless Tree - Chapter 2: My Squalor
ok im real confused about this relationship between the family but another good one
The Leafless Tree - Chapter 2: My Squalor
whats confusing? Anyway you are supposed to be a bit confused about the family relationship. It gets clarified soon
The Leafless Tree - Chapter 2: My Squalor
well I understand that the father is kind of unhinged because his wife and im guessing the mother of teh chilldern cheated on him and left him and i think that the dad is afraid of her doing the same and in his own way is trying to help but what about her brothers whats up with them
The Leafless Tree - Chapter 2: My Squalor
All in good time alexis 
The Leafless Tree - Chapter 2: My Squalor
ok. hey am i right in my charachter descriptions
The Leafless Tree - Chapter 2: My Squalor
yes you are actually and nice inference that martha was the wife ( although this was a bit obvious as was intended). Anyway, the characters will begin to change, ESPECIALLY Caroline and Drake
The Leafless Tree - Chapter 2: My Squalor
hm interesting. this is just a theory i have but it seems to me that you’re trying to make it so that the daughter is young but i get the feeling she may be older. am i way off
The Leafless Tree - Chapter 2: My Squalor
dammit your questions are revealing my next chapters haha. I will tell you this though: she does not know her age (how can she? she hasnt been out of the basement since she was 5.) but she will find it out later. Since it is in the first person i couldnt tell you the age yet but that is on purpose
The Leafless Tree - Chapter 2: My Squalor
sorry for ruining it i’m a naturally inquisitie person. That idea of makng her seem like a little girl because as far as she knows she is it was sheir abosolute genius. Just out of curiosity did u ever read the story i put up
The Leafless Tree - Chapter 2: My Squalor
hah no problem. and yes i did. i’ll comment on them if you want just busy studying for finals sorry. ill offer criticisms/praise later
The Leafless Tree - Chapter 2: My Squalor
well i’ve only posted one so far and everybody hated but im not giving up. im working on another story kind of a charchter study of me and my life as a transvestite. also its just entertaining. so what did you think of my first story