She told her friend

I’ve always been turned on about being caught in a diaper. When making love to my girlfriend we talk about how I want her to tell her friends. She knows it just bedroom talk so she goes along with it. Several weeks ago while making love I told her not to let me back out. I told her to please tell her friends no matter what I say later after we had sex.
Well it turns out she did exactly what was asked of her. She told her best friend that I wear diapers. At first I didn’t believe her. I figured it was just a way to turn me on. That was until her friend came over one night to drink some wine.
My girlfriend and I were sitting on the couch. Her friend was sitting on a chair. My girlfriend whispered in my ear that she wasn’t kidding that her friend did know I wore diapers. It was a turn on but I still didn’t believe her. In my head I wished it was true but I figured my girlfriend would be too embarrassed to tell a friend.
Halfway thru the night my girlfriend finally asked her friend if she’d like to see the diapers I wore. Before she could even answer my girlfriend turned to me and said to go upstairs and bring down a diaper. I was in complete shock. I had a knot in my stomach because another girl knew I wore diapers.
I stood up and was in a daze. I started to walk towards the stairs to go up for a diaper. My girlfriend then said to not forget to bring down the changing pad, wipes or the powder. Still in a daze I retrieved the items.
I don’t know what was harder, walking up the stairs to get the diaper or walking down with the diaper. As I got to the bottom of the steps both girls were laughing at my embarrassment. I walked over to my girlfriend and started to hand her the diaper and the other changing items. She asked me what i was doing. I told her that these were the items she had asked for. She responded with don’t hand them to me. Give them to her.
I didn’t think the pit in my stomach could get bigger but I was wrong. I walked over to the friend and held out the diaper and changing items. My girlfriend told me to ask her to put it on you. I asked her friend if she could please put a diaper on me. She stood up and took my hand saying that she would love to diaper me.
I felt so small holding her hand as she walked me into the other room. She laid down the pad and asked me to remove my pants. After my pants came off she had me lay down on the changing pad. She told me to life my butt and she pulled off my boxers. She then pulled out some wipes and began to clean me up. She once again had me raise my butt so she could slide the diaper under me. After I was on the diaper she started to apply the powder. I was very close to having an orgasm long before she applied the powder. As soon as she started to rub the powder in though I couldn’t take it any more. I started to make a mess onto my stomach. She quickly grabbed the wipes to catch what she could. After I was finished she once again cleaned me up and put more powder down. She then fastened the diaper and told me to stand up. As i was getting up she whispered into my ear that the little mess would be our secret.
I stood up in front of her and she was on her knees. She patted my butt and handed me the dirty wipes. She said to throw them away and then come back to her. As I walked back into the room with her I noticed my pants were folded laying on the changing pad. She took my hand and walked me back to my girlfriend.
She walked me right up to my girlfriend and passed her my hand. I sat down on the couch with nothing on but a t-shirt and diaper. My girlfriend asked me if I was ok. I told her yes and she began to talk to her friend. They both had a conversation like I wasn’t even in the room.
Normally I only wear a diaper when I’m horny. That was the first time I’ve ever worn one after an orgasm. I was no longer horny nor did i want a diaper on. I felt like a small child. I was being ignored sitting in a room with two women and I had a diaper on.

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Re: She told her friend

To start with, this looks more like a couple scenes from a larger work that could use some editing to clarify what is happening and some fleshing out of details. The whole thing feels very disjointed, and is hard to follow.

While it’s possible to write a good story of this length, it’s harder than a longer work because you have so little time to give us reason to care about the characters and what happens to them. A less well chosen phrase that might go unnoticed in a longer work can seriously detract from something this short.

Your spelling is good, and your sentences have reasonable grammar, which is a start. Next, try adding some actual dialog. Pick up any published novel for some examples of the mechanics.

I suggest you start something new, and this time try to make it at least four times the length. Consider what happens besides “main character ends up diapered” a bit more, and write a bit of that in. If you really want to try to salvage this one, consider some additional lead in and explanations. Make it two to three times the length, or more if you add more scenes.

Re: She told her friend

[QUOTE=Ally;69156]To start with, this looks more like a couple scenes from a larger work that could use some editing to clarify what is happening and some fleshing out of details. The whole thing feels very disjointed, and is hard to follow.

While it’s possible to write a good story of this length, it’s harder than a longer work because you have so little time to give us reason to care about the characters and what happens to them. A less well chosen phrase that might go unnoticed in a longer work can seriously detract from something this short.

Your spelling is good, and your sentences have reasonable grammar, which is a start. Next, try adding some actual dialog. Pick up any published novel for some examples of the mechanics.

I suggest you start something new, and this time try to make it at least four times the length. Consider what happens besides “main character ends up diapered” a bit more, and write a bit of that in. If you really want to try to salvage this one, consider some additional lead in and explanations. Make it two to three times the length, or more if you add more scenes.[/QUOTE]

This was the first thing i’ve ever put on here. This was an actual event in my life. I put it on here just to share the experience. I didn’t think to put it into a story where you could follow the characters. I guess I could add to it an make it better though.

Re: She told her friend

We do actually have a blog section, if that interests you.
But yeah, probably a decent number of stories here are at least based on real events.
If you want to share more of the experience than just the events at face value, you’ve got the actual memory to draw on.

When you told your girlfriend, what was your intention? Just bedroom talk, or did the idea that she might actually do it, thrill you even more?

What about the big reveal? What was racing through your mind about the other girl?
Surely there were all manner of questions in your head. You could easily add a ton of impact to sharing the experience if you went into those thoughts in greater detail. What about this friend, what was her reaction?

And how about the finish? Once you reached orgasm, your outlook clearly changed. You no longer wanted to wear the diaper. You were then forced to confront… something, but what? Was it shame? If so, why? You said you felt like a small child. Was that a good thing? Was it what you wanted? Or was that the point where you realized that you were mistaken about your own fantasy?

Sharing the experience is far more than just telling us what happened. I’m sure you’ve had plenty of time to think about the event. If you’re interested in sharing the experience – what you experienced – then you’d do well to go much deeper into what was significant about this event.

If you do; a couple things.
Line breaks between paragraphs aren’t required, but they really help to make reading more pleasant.

Also, try to avoid describing dialogue.

She responded with don’t hand them to me. Give them to her.

could be…

“Don’t hand them to me,” she said before pointing to her friend. “Give them to her.”

Ally is right, you’ve not given us much (hardly any) time to care about the characters. Giving us more backstory would help to let us learn more about you, your girlfriend, and whomever else. So from that angle, you may want to tell a bit longer story.

Alternatively, you could keep the same scenes you have here, but you’d have to go into excruciating detail to truly convey how impactful this event was to you.