playing baby part two

Chapter two

" You don’t look good. " Violet remarked as she opened the door and looked at her friend. " i don’t feel well" Sandy responded. " so whats going on? " violet asked. Slowly Sandy began to bring Violet up to speed. She told her everything, from walking in on her daughter to the conversation afterwards. She even was able to talk about her feelings on the matter. Violet listened carefully to her friends story. When Sandy finished, Violet spoke quietly. " first and foremost, you did nothing wrong. Teen babies, or infantilists, are more common than you think. Nobody knows what causes someone to be this way. It just is." " but what do i do now? " Sandy asked. " that depends on what you want. " Violet answered. " i just want it to go away. " sandy responded. " well it won’t just go away. but you can make it go away if you want. " violet said. " How? " was the only words that Sandy could get out. “Simple” violet responded. " give her what she wants, but on your terms. " " what do you mean?" Sandy inquired. " Teen Babies want to be a baby for real. " Violet said. " What i would do is make her a baby for the summer. The whole thing. By the end of summer she will be so sick of it that she will be begging to be a big girl for the rest of her life. " " I’m not sure I can do that." Sandy replyed. " Sure you can. Its no different than taking care of a real baby. Everything is just bigger. I would add on thing to it. " Violet said matter of factly. " I would require her to come here and see me once a week." " Why?" Sandy asked. " I can monitor her mentle health and give her a place to complain about being treated like a baby after the newness wears off. " Sandy thought long and hard about what Violet had been saying. It could work. She was not sure that she was looking forward to spending the summer changing diapers but the reset of it sounded like the perfect way to deal with it. After all if she had been caught smoking sandy would have made her finish a whole pack. Just one thing bothered her. " What if this doesn’t work? " Sandy asked her friend. " First off it will work. Second off with the therpy that she will be getting from me she will want to give up being a baby for sure. " Violet answered. After a moment of contimplation Sandy stood up and anounced. " I’ll do it. " " Good. Have her in my office next Friday. We will start therpy then. " Violet said as she shook her friends hand. " And good luck. " " Thank you" Sandy said as she walked out of the room. She had some shopping to do before Sarah got home from school today.
Sandy left her friends office and headed straight to the store. There she picked up everything she thought she might need for the summer. She picked up a couple of bottles and a couple of pacifers. She picked up three big cans of formula and of course she picked up a couple of bags of diapers. Soon she was arriving home. She was somewhat surprised to see her daughter home already. Sarah was laying out on the front lawn sun bathing. Sandy put her purchases away and then went to her daughter. " Hi Mom" Sarah said as Sandy came into view. " What’s up?’ " Nothing much.Your home early. " Sandy responded. " Half day. " Sarah said. " Well I need to talk to you. " Sandy said matter of factly. Sarah sat up and looked at her mother. " So Talk" “I have been thinking about what you said last night.” " Oh that" Sarah said remembering the night before. She had hoped her mother would have forgotten about it. " Sarah." Sandy started. " I have been thinking and if begin a baby is what you want then being a baby you should have." Sarah looked at her mother with a surprise look on her face. " What do you mean. " " If you want to be a baby then I am willing to let you be one. For the summer. " Sandy told her daughter. " I see. " Sarah said with a hint of uncertainty in her voice." Now there are two conditions that I must insist on. " Sandy said. " first and for most if that is what you want it must last all summer. There is no changing your mind after a week or two. " " Sarah just looked at her mother. Could this really be happening. It would be a dream come true. Sarah simply knodded her head. " And second you must have weekly therpy sessions with Violet." Sandy continued. " Why?" Sarah asked. " Its one of my condidtions. " was all Sandy said." So the question to you is. Do you want to be a baby or not?" Sarah stared at her mother for a moment. She was still trying to figure out if her mother was kidding or not. After a mintue of silence Sarah spoke from her heart. " More than anything." " Then come with me." Sandy said. Both of them got up and walked into the house. They walked upstairs and into Sarah’s room. Sarah was shocked to see the bags of diapers on her bed. " Lay down" Sandy commanded. Sarah layed down on her bed. Sandy grabbed a diaper out one of the bags of diapers and quickly put her daughter back into diapers. Sarah lay on her bed in bliss. She was finally getting what her heart had always wanted. The only thing that bothered her was the thought of talking with Violet about this. Sandy looked at her daughter and smiled. This was going to be fun on some levels. After finishing getting Sarah back in diapers, Sandy put a pacifer in her mouth anf left the room. Sarah sucked the pacifer and smiled. She was a baby at last. Still neither she nor her mother had any idea what the summer held in store.

Re: playing baby part two

I didn’t read beyond the first couple of sentences. Paragraphs are our friends. My eyes aren’t young enough to be able to read them.

Re: playing baby part two

I wonder what’s the deal with paragraphs? The big wall of unbroken text, and Capitalizing Every Word You Type seem extremely common in first-time writers. Is it education, failing our planet’s youth? Is it a mislead and purpose-defeatingly common attempt at style?

Re: playing baby part two

It’s as if they never picked up a novel and noticed that DIALOGUE IS SPACED OUT LINE BY LINE.

Re: playing baby part two

Not too bad of a start. As said before it was a hard read, a few spaves would have helped.