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Re: Odds and Ends
Starting the story from the diaper content, you somehow burned it out immediately. Most of the seeds you have left for future development lead away from purely DL content and this could be one of the reasons that make it harder to write more. You say you had in mind to develop this in a unique way: as a mental exercise, it would be fun to know the ending and the main milestones you wanted to run through and then imagine the story from a different perspective.
It’s something I do often with stories with good characterization: take a side character and imagine to read the story from his perspective. It’s an exercise that also helps to overcome a writer’s block, it adds a new lateral dimension that then can be used to create a bridge that leads back to the main story flow, over the point that was too hard to manage.
Re: Odds and Ends
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