Haven't You Heard...

The midnight moonlit sky shimmered over the glistening lake. The moon shown bright and full showering a pale light on all the trees and plants in the woods. The stars shined almost as bright as the moon. Jexie admired the quiet still night as she sat back on a nearby willow tree. She hadn’t been able to for awhile since her duties called and she was forced to do her unpleasant job. She listened to the sound of little water fall splashing in the lake. There was surprisingly no disturbances and it was very calm and relaxed. Jexie felt relaxed and didn’t let anything get to her. This is her spot where she came to relax or to think.
“Find the Cancer!!!” a sudden voice broke into Jexie’s relaxation and made her jump up hissing, “She has to be around here somewhere!!”
At that moment Jexie sprinted the opposite way of where the voices were coming from and out of the woods. She did not stop until she came to an abandoned house. She ran in and flew down the stiarcase. She dashed down the dark black stairwell until she bumped into something.
“Oof!!! Ow!! Watch it Jexie!” Jexie looked u from where she fell to see someone with cold purple eyes with long layered purple hair who was none other than Jexie’s older sister. “Man!!! I always knew you were a cluts!!” Euthyne snarled walked away with her hair whipping behind her.
“I always knew you were a bitch…” Jexi mumbled.
“What did you say you little whore?!” Euthyne whipped back around.
“You heard me!” Jexie answered while jumping up to her feet.
Euthyne opened her mouth to speak, but a voice interupted her and Jexie’s fight.
“May I asj you two to stop fighting.” Jexie and Euthyne both stopped when they saw their older sister, Naris, standing and watching them.

Haven’t You Heard…

Haven’t you heard? I don’t have time for this shit.

Haven’t You Heard…

a good beginning but it could be a little longer,

I am intrigued by the beginning and the characters but there is nothing else there really to grasp onto.

good start though

Haven’t You Heard…

Intrigue is probably the wrong word.

I am curious about the characters since I see there was a slight interaction.

Haven’t You Heard…

I suppose you could be aware that there are characters. Ish.

Haven’t You Heard…

The situation itself is a little intriguing, but not really the characters. More is definitely needed.