Diaper adverts

Chapter 1
It was December 31st 1989; the turning of the decade had been looked upon with such wonder and incitement by many Americans. Particularly in the city of Los Angeles CA, the entire population looked forward to the policies of George Herbert Walker Bush; the nation’s newly elected president. Of course no one could of for seen the future events which were about to unfold. This was the decade in which more parental supervision would be placed on teenage girls than ever before.
My name by the way is Donna Fanning, I go to Beverly Hills high school, located in L.A., and by 1990 I had turn 17. Not to sound completely vain but my completion at this point of my life was a creamy white, and my body was full and petite. And most particularly my ass came in full and round that winter, and let me tell you I had no problem getting stares walking through the hallways between class periods, and of course my hair was a lush blonde color much like the beautiful Sharon Stone at the time. With my beautiful skin, blonde hair, big booty combined with brilliant talent at writing, I was well on my way to becoming the professional writer I’ve always dreamed of being. Best thing was I was now enter the 11th grade, finally a upper-class men I felt the fullness of my maturity, this was the year in which I would finally be able to write my own pieces for the B H S newspaper, don’t get me wrong, since high school began I was always a part of the school paper, but up until now my role was to cover regular events, such as high school volleyball games, or persons of the month. But since now that I was going to the 11th grade, I looked forward to creating my own pieces, and covering real topics, topics that affected the entire world, and which stood above the average high schoolers mental capacity.
As the New Year began, President Bush of coarse did his own routine presidential address, big surprise right, most kids didn’t care and why should they? Another white man takes the office, by this time Ronald Regan had shed any faith in the government by this point. The famous “War On Drugs” which began in his administration, merely resulted in the waste of tax dollars, and increase in crime. Now here stood another bold face fart, which had a plan to change the future and improve our country. What a load of Bull.
The day of January 10th, I sat with my family around the T.V. to watch Bush please millions of viewers nationwide. My home was pretty decent, we had all the amenities a successful family in 90’s had, from the VCR, all the way to big but not so clear T.V., the neighborhood we lived in was a gated and diverse community, Beverly Hills truly was the perfect place to be a teen. Along with all the beaches, malls, and arcades, this place was a blast, too bad the rest could be said about L.A… By 8 pm my Mom had the T.V. tuned to channel six, my Father still re reading his newspaper was cursing louder than ever, it seems he voted for the democratic nominee.
Harold; “Son of a Bitch, there goes my taxes, right out of the window, probably gonna be used to fight some war.
Donna; “Dad you have enough money to fight ten wars” I said in a cynical tone
Harold;” I’ll be damn if my dollars go to bombing some infidels" he said
My father Harold Fanning had recently retired at the shocking age of 35, he himself was a whiz at the stock market, and at the turn of the decade it paid off. Over the years while working for a stock brokers firm, he was slowing buying up the small penny stocks of the Huggies Diapers Corporation, that’s right, thanks to diapers my family was more well off than ever, the company during the 80’s started offering penny stocks with a return investment of 50% by the year 1990 to just about everyone. For some strange reason my father saw this company booming within the next decade, particular because of the rising birth rate in Urban areas, where teenage pregnancy ran rapid.
This resulted in a huge payoff for my dad. The report gathered up by the L.A. times predicted that diaper production by 1992 would increase by 200%, which was just unreal; I mean who would need that many diapers anyway? Sure teen pregnancies were increasing according to the report by the Board of Health, but how successful would these companies eventually become?
My mom, Sara Fanning was the spitting image of me at an older age, while her actually age was 40; she still had the figure of a 20 year old gymnast. She wouldn’t admit to my Dad, but she actually voted republican, not that she paid attention politics, but she figured Bush would be a better fit than the other guy.
Sara; “Harold would you mind not cursing up a storm every time Bush is on the T.V., Laura turn up the volume” she said.
On the pontemium the newly elected president stood proudly and firmly as he announces his goals.
“It is my wish to see this glorious country of our return back to the strong Christian values which it was founded on” stated Bush
At first I thought he was going to announce another holy war, but instead he stated his wish to decrease the number of teen pregnancies. Which was something I actually agreed with, I know crazy right? Well just because I am hot and blonde doesn’t mean I’m a whore. Unlike my friends who could definitely use a lesson in Chasity. While I was saving my virginity for marriage. My friends who will remain nameless for the time being were experimenting with all types of wild practices.
" All around the nation our young girls are giving up their wellbeing by daily to god knows who, If we want to restore our country back to glory it once was, we must take DRASTIC steps to ensure their sexual conductivity is reserved for marriage. " stated Bush
At this point I realized I didn’t agree with this a-hole, after all from the way he sounded he made himself out to be another conservative fuck trying to tell women what to do with their own bodies, while I myself didn’t have sex, I still didn’t wish for others not to be able to enjoy it, my opinion was to do what you feel, so long as it was safe and didn’t hurt anyone. But from the speech I could tell that Presidents Bushes policy was going to be extremely effective given the amount of cheers he received from the audience.
Sara; “Back in my day we were told that if we didn’t wait until the right time our hair would fallout” she said in a joking fashion.
Harold; “Like he knows anything about love making, you see his wife, god it looks like he dug up George Washington” said Harold
Donna; “Mom what do you think he means by drastic measures”? Said Laura
Sara; “Who knows, it’s nothing to worry about dear”, she said in a calm fashion.
Donna; “Well unless he means issuing chastity belts, I don’t see how he could possible reduce pregnancies”?
Harold; “Hah for you Donna, no way, now for your friend Makala I could see” he said in a firm tone
Sara; “Harold Fanning how you could be so rude”
Harold; “Dear please you know how she is”
Sara; "Ignore your father hon he’s just grumpy is, by the way do you have any plans for plans tonight it is Friday?
Donna; “Nothing special just a movie and pizza at the mall, might do so shopping” she said turning her smiling gaze upon her father, who found it hard to resist the precious gaze of his little girl.
Harold; “Yea Yea here ya go sweaty” he said giving her 70 bucks out of his fat wallet.
Sara; “Ok im going to get ready now, Makala should be here in 20 mins” said Sara as she exited the room.
While getting dress I was thinking about what Dad said about Makala, she was my best friend since preschool, we’ve seen it all together, and been BFF’s through it all. However, since 9th grade the difference I’ve notice with her is her love of sex. Makala Washington was a 5’9, 150 LB, African American bombshell. Seriously the girl had the looks of just about every video vixen you’ve seen in Hip Hop videos. Smooth Skin, luscious lips, ebony black hair, a good rack and of course the ass that would give a nun a hard on. Usually her ass was always displayed for the entire world, not that she could help it of course, but it isn’t like she would try to stop from showcasing it either, her favorite outfit was simply and also reveling, This on sable was made up of a colorful designer t shirt, and tights which would exposed her round curving backside. Compared to her, my ass might as well off been an Asian girl’s ass.
Since the start of high school she was frequently having relations with just about every boy who she befriended. Surprisingly these weren’t the simply muscle headed jocks, or pretty boy Madonna’s. But nerds and geeks, while she had a great body, it didn’t exactly mean she had a great mind. By 9th grade she figured the surest way of passing was getting the majority of nerds to do her work for her, And how did she do it? I’m sure I don’t need to explain, but I will anyway because most of you reading this probably wish you knew a girl as slutty as Makala.
That’s right, for book reports you could expect a B.J., for history and geography projects, expect a hand job and a chance to finger her until your hand gets tired. However if you wanted to get in her pants, just do her Homework for a week. It might be hard to believe but Makala was actually attracted to nerds, dorks and geeks alike. She loved reading Sci Fi fiction, and Star Trek was her favorite show on T.V. usually she would find a guy one once a week to act as her tutor and then she would tell them her scheme. Of course being desperate but still smart, they were skeptical of the entire thing, but after making out with her for about 15 minutes she would change their minds. I was pretty funny seeing the pissed off looked on the popular boys face, when Makala would simply ignore them. By working this arrangement not was she satisfying her own fetish, but fulfilling the fantasy of all dorks, nerds and geeks alike, who by the way at least treated her a lot better than popular boys ever did. This is why I never really objected to it.
After 20 mins I decided on a cute red dress and black heels to wear to the mall. Makala picked me up in her mom’s Mercedes Benz at 9:30 and we rode to the Beverly Hills shopping plaza in style. On the way she told me about her newest boyfriend Lenny Thomas, leader of debate team who was currently helping her with her Research Paper on the Cold war.
Donna; “So how big was he?”
Makala; “pretty big girl” she said with the widest grin,
Makala; “I’m you telling Don, if you want a stud get yourself a bookworm, he had me screaming louder than when I watch Friday the 13th last week”. “By the way when are you gonna give it up to some lucky S.O.B "
Donna; “I told you I’m saving myself for Brad Pitt”, she said
Makala; “Sure I bet he’s just waiting for you to become legal” she said in a joking manner
Once we got to the mall, it was around 9:45 and the usually crowds were there however there was particular a different vibe in the air. For instance we noticed that replays of the presidential speech made earlier were being showed throughout out the many electronic shops the plaza had to offer. Also for some reason almost every teenage girl was being escorted around by their moms or aunts, usually Saturday night you would find girls alone and accompanied by their friends, but it seemed tonight me and Makala were the only ones without supervision. Before hitting the eatery we decided to check out a some stores particularly some new stores which just opened up. One was called “Conservative Teens”, in truth the store looked lame, however Makala did always like to try on the most less reveling cloths, all so that she could prove that she looked sexy in anything, this goes along with her reasoning for mostly wearing tights and t shirts, in this outfit it would be way easier for her to try things on. However upon walking in we were shocked at what we found. Instead of plain Jane looking cloths, our eyes were exposed to unreasonable bright and kid dish clothing, such Overalls with Sesame street characters, Rugrats t-shirts, and strap up sneakers that feature bring flowers and butterflies. What was surprising to find were the sizes for these cloths all made to fit teenage girls.
Makala; “Want the fuck, who would wear this stuff”
Store clerk; “Excuse me miss would you mind watching your language”
Makala; “Sorry it’s just come on I wouldn’t be caught dead in some carebear overalls or my little pony skirts.” She said in a laughing manner, when I read about this store opening, the cloths were supposed to appeal to teens nationwide
Store Clerk; “I’ll have you know since we opened two days ago our sales have been through the roof in this area alone. She said
Donna; “Wait you guys have more stores?” she asked
Store Clerk; “Why of course we do, in fact in Cali alone there are at least 50 stores” she said
Donna; “How long have you guys been around?” she asked
Store Clerk; " Since 1986, were based out of Arlin, Texas, at first our only sponsor was local businesses in that area, but then in 87 we received huge backing from the Texas Ranger Owner”. “Our new president, can you believe it?” she asked
Then it hit me, the President’s speech, was he planning to get teenagers, girls in particular to starting dressing like a bunch a preschoolers? This might just make a good story to read next week in the school paper.
Makala; “So!!! Got underwear”? She asked
Store clerk; “We sure do right this way”
We were lead to the back to of store, by this time my eyes were completely flabbergasted at the infantile clothing being exposed in my periphery, right in the center of the aisle there stood a tall cardboard cutout of Shannen Doherty, in a Pink Miney Mouse sweater and a low cut purple and black strip skirt, I guess cute was the new black in Hollywood.
Makala; “I don’t know Donna I bet you would look sexy in these”, she stated holding up a pair of bring yellow panties with big bird on the front.
Donna; “Why don’t me just a wear a diaper. She said sarcastically
Store clerk; “Oh it just so happens we have those in stock as well” said the clerk in a very positive tone
Makala “What what do you mean”
Store clerk; “Just over here” she said as she slowly move behind the counter to fetch a rather large box
With a flip of a box cutter she had the parcels in the large brown box removed in an instance. When she did my and Makala were shocked at the contents it held with. Immediately the clerk pulled out a purple puffy packaged marked Flexies in bold white, sized 7(L) 29-30, me and my friend were speechless.
Donna; “So let me get this straight not only do you sell baby cloths but also baby diapers for teens” she said in a disgusted tone.
Store clerk; “Well usually we sell these online, but as of lately Moms all around have been buying them more and more, one lady today bought up four packages, not these of coarse” she said pointing back to the pack of Flexies which on the front cover had a picture of Dawson’s Creek star Katie Holmes happily modeling the product in noting but white t-shirt.
How demeaning I though, for god sakes the diaper had carebear designs on the front and was a light shade of pick, along with the ridiculous flexies logo on the front right on top.
Store clerk; “the Women bought these instead” she stated as she pulled out another pack.
However these were much bigger than the flexies, the pack read Huggies Ultimate and were sized 8(XL) 31-31”, This time featuring a young Jennifer love Hewitt facing backwards in nothing but pink flower adorned diaper, clearly sized to fit her famous ass, just when you thought you seen it all.
Makala; “Ok Donna were out of here, thanks for the freak show lady, but fortunate enough were toilet trained”. She said as she headed for the entrance.
Donna; “Sorry but you do have to admit, this is weird, I mean come on”
Store clerk; “I agree, I had the same reaction when I saw these covers, and we usually sell these online, the majority that use them are bedwetters” she stated in a reassuring fashion.
Donna; “Well all the same thanks” she said following her friends lead”.
As I was walking out of the store, my attention was soon on Makala large butt, it budge pretty wide especially in such small black tights she wore. And that’s when it hit me the size on the Huggies pack was the very same panty size as Makala wore, I remember specially from last time she bought underwear from a store. I simply shrugged the thought off as a mere coincidence, however I did feel sorry of the daughter of the Mother who went out of her way to bur four packs of those monstrosities known as teen diapers.
We decided to dine at Lug i’s, the movie didn’t start until 11 anyway, and it was one of those late horror shows at a discount price. As we dug into our slices, we discussed the events which had just unfolded.
Makala; “Girl can you believe it, teen size diapers, God I would never wear them”.
Donna; “The store clerk mentioned they were designed for bedwetters, but I find it hard that Bedwetters want something a toddler would wear”
Makala; “Why would those celebs agree to something like that anyway”
Donna; “Money I guess, Be back I gotta use it”
Walking to the bathroom I heard some commotion coming from the back of restroom, I simply ignored because I had to go extremely bad, however the screams got louder as I was finishing in the stall. After pulling up my pants I step on the toilet to get a view of the situation. Might I add what I saw was pretty fucked up. Upon the baby changing station, there appeared to be a girl who looked a year or two younger than me, at the moment she appeared to be struggling for her dear life, as her mother now had her daughter’s pants pulled down and wrapped around her legs.
The Mother; “Honey you know you can’t handle horror movies without messing your pants, now hold still” she said pinning the poor girls arms down
The daughter; “This is such bullshit Mom” she said thrashing and moving in every degree possible, but her struggles were useless as her mother easily held her down and cut her already somewhat damp panties off with small pair of safety scissors. Then reaching her hand in her purse she pulled out a small pack of wipes, a condense bottle of baby powder, and a rather large baby diaper adorned with Barney the dinosaur designs. After a few wipes and a solid dusting of talcum the Mom pulled the girls legs up in the air and placed her round bottom on her new padded undergarments. Then in a swift motion the Mother had her taped up and off the table.
The poor girl, by this time I had stepped down from the toilet and existed the stall to wash my hands. Upon washing I heard the girl’s tears and frustration, from the sound of it seems that they had some trouble fitting her jeans around her diapered rear end. As they walked out I noticed the girls face. This girl who was just humiliated in private was Liza Hernandez a member of the cheerleader squad at school. I seem to recall her just last week getting caught in the janitors closest with her panties off making out with the captain of the football team. It seems her mother found a fitting punishment. Upon returning to the table where my friend was already on her fourth slice, I noticed that the clock struck at 10:50.
Donna; “We should probably get going” she said in a shocking fashion
Makala; “Everything ok”, she asked in a concern manner
Donna; "Yea I’ll tell you later, let’s just go so we can find so good seats.
After the movie the drive home was pleasant and loud, as Makala played once again her favorite Salt n Pepa CD, but all could think about was Laura being diapered by her Mom in the restroom of a Pizzeria. Maybe the most bizarre event I seen, what was more shocking was the fact that her panties were for some reason wet. One might be able to assume that she was some kind of bed wetter. After being dropped off home by my friend, I ran up to my room and hopped on the internet, I wanted to do a little research of the “Conservative Teen Company” and just like the female store clerk said, the company itself was based out of Arlin, Texas, upon further reading I found an interesting article while browsing on the website. It seems in the year 1985, the town council had voted on an amendment which restricted the activity of teens, apparently a strict curfew was enforced in that year to anyone under the age of 18. Girls from 10 all the way to 17 weren’t allowed to be on the streets past 7:00 pm. Another rule which was enforced that aimed directly at girls was the restriction of jeans and short dresses. In fact a certain fine would be issued to the said parents of the teen girl who violated this policy. In schools bathroom visits were also limited, it was discovered that in the local Arlin High that girls during bathroom breaks were mingling in bathrooms smoking pot or having un protected sex. To a Christian community as strict as this one, these actions were deemed unacceptable. The governor at the time George Bush sought out a new policy that would keep Arlins wide party girls under control. After issuing a strict uniform policy, the governor took daytime bathroom breaks away from all girls in the state of Texas alone. It was deemed extreme put several committees all around Texas voted for the measures.
So instead of bathroom breaks, a new alternative measure was offered, that’s right you perverts brace yourself for this but….On the day of Feb 23, 1985 the governor issued that by the commonwealth of TX, all girls attending public, private, or catholic schools were issued padded undergarments to wear throughout the day. These garments made were produced by a small company funded by the Bush administration, named the Conservative Teen company. These first undergarments were more like the first depends made, they produce horrid results for girls around Texas. Besides the fact that no girls wished to wear them, these undergarments were too lose and flimsy, parents throughout the state complained constantly over their daughter coming home with rashes. Apparently no one paid close attention to see that girls were cleaning themselves inefficiently. So in order to sort this conflict out communities began requesting that the school nurses be responsible for making sure the diapers were efficiently put on and clean.
Scrolling down the page I read all sorts of comments about the policy, some negative and some, infact the majority positive. It seems that while teens hated the policy, parents and teachers saw an increase in text scores and grades. One concerned mother named Barbara Fitzgerald thought the state issued padded underwear ought to be replaced by a more traditional means. She even went as far suggesting that teen girls be put in the same type of disposables that babies wore. It was shocking to think that a state could actually take such steps to decrease teen pregnancies, but the policy was back up by adults everywhere and was given further positive feedback. Eventually the “Conservative Teen” company began compiling with the wishes of parents such as Barbara Fitzgerald. By the year 1986, it issued its own brand of disposables which were sold to the school boards. These newly made diapers were called “Flexies”, the same brand me and Makala saw in at the mall. These diapers were distributed all throughout the High, Middle, and elementary schools across TX. Nurses were given the task of enforcing the new policy of diapering teen girls during the day. Next to this article was a link to a medical supplies website. After clicking this link I was able to view the purchases made by the state of Texas, in the year 1986. Apparently a total of 100 changing tables ADULT SIZED, were purchased and out fitted in old ladies restrooms of schools. Female privacy was thrown directly out of the window. While on the medical site, I also noticed that the one item which was not sought after in the year 1986, one particular supporter of the act was the future president. His policy had to of been violating some law. Saturday afternoon after finishing up my science project followed by a short article this aimed at boycotting certain immature stores. I decided to head to the library to do more research on President Bush’s early support and financial backing of the Conservative teen clothing store company which produce teen sized baby diapers.
One shocking fact I found in a certain novel written by an 80’s reporter titled “Extreme measures, covered Bush’s enforcement of the padded undergarments requirement in my juvenile female detention center, where some of the baldest and nastiest 14-17yr’s girls in Texas. A few months later the teenage prison took to hiring extra hands in order to enforce the policy. I then stumbled upon some old footage from the basement of the library, this was an old video of a news special featuring the first lady at that time Nancy Regan and her party visiting the detention centers and helping the guards diaper the fussy prisoners. These girls who were labeled public criminals were now as I saw them being pinned down on changing mats in in their cells. The guards along with their various diaper bags came in at 11 and in groups of 2 or 3 guards visited each cell and diapered who ever occupied it. The most shocking part was seeing the famous GTA criminal inmate 23402, Kelly Green being diapered by Nancy Regan herself. This girl stood 5; 8 with red hair, and plump ass, fighting off 3 guards in noting but in prison suit. But eventually four ganged up on her and strip of not only pants and panties, but her women hood as well, as her privates were shaved, as was part of the policy. She then was held onto her bed by two guards, while the other two went to work wiping her clean.
Women guard; “Make sure to hold her firmly down by the legs, she has black belt”
Kelly; “Ya cocksuckers, dam you and ya nappies”
Women guard 2; “Get that powder out of the bag, Lisa bring miss Reagan and the film crew in here .
The First lady was bought into the cell, escorted by the filming crew, as Nancy began to speak about the Kelly’s background, one of the guards pulls out one very large light purple Flexies disposable with princess designs decorated along the front and back.
Nancy; " As you can see this one here needs all the help we can provide here, Miss Green here has stolen a total of 10 cars this month alone, right now we must reshape her character by very Drastic means. Nancy then turned around and went to work diapering the fugitive, even with four guards the 18 year still put up some fight, but all you could see was her legs wiggle, in between her sexy legs was Nancy Regan powdering the fugitive and then collecting the diaper from the other dumped contents and expertly warped garment around Greens waist. The fugitive was then deposited to what looked like an oversized stroller.
Guard; “Don’t worry she’s just a little cranky, will be sure to see that her time out is one she never forget” said the guard rubbing her hands together. And so it happed that female detention centers such as these became, oversized daycares. The prisoner was taken to a more private facility, that afternoon however not before Nancy Regan herself spanked her bare bottom on live T.V.This was the scene all throughout the video, teen fugitive females with legs high in the air having one of those ridiculous baby garments strap around their loins. From the video, I could see this policy was slowly making its way across the country; you think this kind perverted and unfair practice would be on the news, but apparently because of its positive results, no thought to do a news story on it, until now anyway. I wasn’t gonna let the same fate befall my High School. Despite being exhausted, I brewed some coffee and went right to work in my attempts to expose these perverted policies, it was either that or end up walking going to school in one of those ridiculous disposables. I mean did these people not realize what they’re doing to their daughters?
(“Cutesy Music Plays in the background as a Concerned looking Mother enters the scene and sits on a bed in what looked like her teenage daughters room”)
Concerned Mom; “With the prices of Tampons, we weren’t sure if my girls would have the protection they need in order to handle their periods, we as parents were also concerned with the sanitary conditions around their school bathrooms and public facilities. "
(Enter Save by the Bell actresses Tiffany Thiessen and Elizabeth Berkley dressed in Sweaters and Jeans)
Tiffany; that’s why Moms everywhere are making the change from messy panties and tampons to Huggies! She said pulling down her jeans to show of here garments featuring this time Muppet babies
Elizabeth; “that’s right, by just signing up to the Huggies club this month at your local supermarket , each parent receives their first pack of 60 diapers free, along with some awesome t-shirts” she exclaimed pulling of her sweater to show off the Huggies shirt adorned with more Muppet characters.
Elizabeth, Tiffany Finally both yelled out; “So make the change!!!”
Concerned Mom; “Speaking of which” she said in a menacing tone as she got up from the bed and flipped out two changing pads and placed them on the queen size, then in a swift motion, she had both Kelly and Jessie on their backs with their butts out, and jeans down, as the scene came played down the Mother began unstrapping the dirty diapers of the save by bell girls and the commercial played out from there.
That was the ad I saw before going to bed that Sunday night, as bizarre as it was, I found even more weird that all of this subliminal advertising could occur in just one weekend, it’s like so sick kids fantasy. Any way on Monday morning between 1st and 2nd period, I ran into Lisa Hernandez who made it very apparent she needed to talk about Friday’s event.
Lisa; “Donna if you tell anyone, I’ll kill you alright” she said in a threatening tone”
Donna; “Lisa, get off my back I could care less that your mom puts you diapers before a movie” she said sarcastically, " by the way why”?
Lisa; “Keep your voice down pueta”
I hadn’t told anyone, but it was possible she read my article exposing the growing trend of the diapering policy throughout schools in Texas. I had not intention of telling anyone, I couldn’t blame this girl for questioning me. After all if anyone else found out, her reputation would be down the drain.
Lisa; " Not that it’s any of your business, but the last time I saw Nightmare on Elm street I sort of piss my pants in her car at the driveway theater, and then these stupid flexies come out and well you know the rest”
Donna; “Lisa I assure you, my lips will be sealed”
(Bell goes off)
Lisa; “Thanks Don” she said walking in a relieved manner
But she wouldn’t have to be embarrassed for too long, over the next few months, I covered the growing trends of infantile culture through which the "Conservative Teen clothing store took on. It began with Beverly Hills High issuing Uniforms to all students, as in accordance with the new state act of policy teenagers. Are uniforms were the typical school girls outfit, you could probably guess. However at this point things only worsen.
By the month of March alone the country had already been exposed to a total of 40 diaper adverts. It was almost unreal at the rate in which these commercials would appear on television, but it stop there. By May, two other states instigated the padded undergarments requirement in their schools. These states were Arizona and Nevada, two states which weren’t far from California. I found out this shocking news on a Wednesday eating Breakfast with my family in the kitchen. The T.V. was tuned to channel 10 news report, and reporter Dan Williams was standing live in front of the Nevada state government building
Dan; " That’s right Stacy the State legislature had just decreed that all female citizens under the age of 18 remain in specially provided state issued padded undergarments.
Stacy; “Dan, one question just where will these diapers, I mean padded undergarments be produce and sold?”
Dan; “Well, the state is putting aside a separate budget that provides schools with the money to but all necessary supplies, we are also told that the Popular clothing company nationwide, the “Conservative Teen” will be providing the this state with a number of specialty brands that suit the needs of teenage girls”.
The report panned down with the Reporter displaying the new diapers that were going to be worn.
Sara; “You know this doesn’t surprise me, lately at work all I been hearing was everyone’s concern the restrooms in schools”
Donna; “Mom how can you not see that this is nothing more than propaganda, High school bathrooms are no more sanitary than other public restrooms”
Harold; “What about the other issue at hand here?”
Donna; “Which is?”
Harold; " Most likely this is that Chasity thing Bush was taking about, only they aren’t using belts but diapers, this is incredible he said pointing to the paper to show how good the Huggies stock was doing. Ever since that company “Conservative Teens” been offering those products on their websites their stock is going through the roof!!! He stated in a joyous fashion.
Sara; “Harold please remain clam, you’re getting that look again”
Harold; "That’s because were in the money baby "
Donna; “Dad did it ever occur to you that this fascination with diapers and infant clothing is just another sick and twisted governmental plot to control its inhabitants and invoke sanctions on the free will of free women everywhere”
Harold; “Of course dear, heck back in me and you mother’s day, they tried to scare us with all types of stuff. Teen pregnancy is just something that will stand out in your time”.
Sara; “Ah hmmm, said her mother as she looked squarely at her father”
Harold; “Which is why I and your mother decided to also take some precaution”
Donna; “No she said standing from the table”
Sara; “oh honey it only be for at school, and you can take them off as soon as you get home” she said trying to comfort Donna in her arms
Donna; “No!!! get off of me; you are not putting me in those things”
At this point I was pretty, I had just spent the entire week lashing out against all this stupid carp and now my mom held me in a tight squeeze as my father reached into a cabinet and gathered up a rather large box of "Huggies teen size. I found it pretty dumb that under the box was labeled padded underwear, but there was no telling apart from actual diapers. No matter what the company did to make it appear more mature, the red and white package featuring Jennifer Connelly posing in her Winnie the Pooh bear design Huggies, wearing nothing but a tight flowered t was not helping.
Harold; “It won’t be that bad sweaty. The company selling these is giving us store credit with every box we buy; you can do all the shopping you want there: he said as he removed one of the diapers from the pack and handed it of to his wife.
Sara; " Come on Hon ill help you out” she said as she lifted her daughter across her shoulder and carried upstairs, with her daughter in one hand and a diaper and baby powder in the other.
End of Chapter 1.

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There’s so much misattribution, racism, sexism, and criticism without context in just the first paragraph that I can’t go on to any of the rest of the story.

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Dude this fetish alone is pretty fucked up to begin with, if your offended dont read it

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Da Fuk, please point me to the yellow brick road leading to this ravenous world of sex deprived horny teenage girls.
Lots of interesting grammatical things with Makala’s speech. Regardless of if this is intentional it’s like a road bump in the dialog and can be very distracting at times.

I completely agree. This however doesn’t bother me in the slightest. The lack of context I assume is due to the first person POV where I believe it to be, due to Donna’s haughty air, completely natural for the protagonist to just throw out opinionated comments at the reader regardless of how insensitive they may be. Is this a good writing method? No not at all, but still I recognize this possibility,

I hope you’re aware you just attacked the entirety of this community with your “this fetish is pretty fucked up” statement. Never respond to negative comments in such a manner. You’re only inviting more trouble like my own reply.
toot toot
All aboard the hate train!
I’ll be your conductor for this trip and will be fueling the flame with my comments.

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First of all I dont care, I made it for fun, take how you will, I suck at writting and im fine with that. And yea this fetish is fucked up, i should know.

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Also why are you trying to act tough on a website? ???

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let that sink in for a minute.

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Ricochavez, thanks for the acknowledgement.

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I’d like to add that I’m happily waiting for you to continue the story. I find it interesting for its controversial atmosphere and would love to see where things go.

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This begs the question:

Why post on a site that is known for unfiltered critical analysis of stories if you suck at writing and are perfectly content with your lack of literary skills?

I mean, I could probably spend a page and a half going over all the technical errors in your chapter, if I wanted to, but since you pretty much just acknowledged that you don’t really care, why should I?

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i don’t ;D care what anybody else thinks of story .just please please continue with story.
as it is very good.

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Really, In mean if enough people like my shitty style, ill make another chapter

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I especially like how you could buy things online in 1989, especially since the web browser wasn’t invented until 1991. Would have like to see more detail about her Internet search using the gopher protocol or wading through Usenet groups. By the way you couldn’t really scroll on gopher. (I actually still run a gopher site on my server.) Another thing about 1991: that was the year Rugrats first aired.

BTW George Bush Sr, was never governor of Texas. W was, but that was not until after 1991 since he was first elected in 1994.

I love reading stories where people are too young to have lived in the time period or at least never bothered to do research to determine if it things even belong in that time frame.

Keep going. I find it fun to play spot the anachronisms.

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Id like to see more

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See I thought they were just going for the alternate reality way of things. Completely explains all the historical inaccuracy’s

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Well, that’s certainly one way to view it, though one needs to explain how that alternate reality HAPPENED in order to justify its existence. You can’t just alter history without an explanation…

For example, in this case, one could say that Reagan was successfully assasinated by Hinkley, Bush Sr. took over and declared martial law, and his son W succeeded him on the “throne” when he stepped down.

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Not really, if the alternate reality had already been on that path. There would be no need for a point of deviation other than the flap of a butterfly’s wings.

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One still needs to explain the history of the alternate reality, even if you wish to use the caribou sneeze as your justification for it.

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Fair enough grabs a bag of D&D dice and rolls the d 20 looks like Japan did not attack the US in 1942, instead they convince the US that a technological alliance would benefit them both greatly. The atom is still split but instead of using it to create two bombs, it is further refined into an early release of the Hydrogen bomb. Technology advances at a rapid pace making the internet publicly available. (while I am not the author I did like the premise of the story, plus you gave me an excuse to use my D&D dice lol)

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Once more its a story, who cares

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Well, if you don’t, I guarantee your readers won’t. And that’s kind of a bad thing when you’re a writer. If your readers don’t care about anything in the story, they’re not going to keep reading.