A Torn Family

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A Torn Family

Not a bad start, and you don’t need to get in to the ABDL theme until you are ready.
Please continue.

A Torn Family

Well, this is interesting^^ It has a fair amount realism portrayed into the characters’ current predicaments. Now other than a few grammatical errors, nice first chapter :slight_smile: Just a note; I think 3’5 might be abit short for an eight year old, no?

A Torn Family

Why would you post this with the statement “It doesn’t seem likely that I’ll continue it…?” All that does is make me not want to read your story.